The first question I have for Sean when looking at his portraits is this: When you make a portrait, are you seeing yourself through the lens, or trying to show me something about the person you are photographing? Portraits are about so much more than technique, and work as a collaboration. The portraits I see in this portfolio seem to be focused much more on technique than the person in the frame, and that’s where the ambiguity comes in - I think that Sean needs to focus more specifically on what he wants to accomplish by making the portraits. Are we supposed to learn about the person being photographed, or are they acting to represent some larger ideal? I don’t want to discourage the pursuit of the portrait however. I will be the first to admit that it is a challenge to photograph another person. What I do want to suggest is to keep working - perhaps set up some kind of studio environment where you are limited to the same lighting/background, and then see about trying to coax the person out in the image. I think this is where the strength will come through, and then you can begin to experiment with the techniques, because right now, the techniques tend to overpower the subject. With some work though, this will change, because there is a measure of creativity here that I think can bring out some great images.