The resulting image looks much better now, a nice soft expression and a great warm smile!
Now that we are in the right ballpark of what looks good, let’s look at details of the image.
This image was shot handheld in pretty low light, the diaphragm was kind of wide open (maybe f1.8 or so) so depth of field is very shallow. The face is slightly out of focus, you can easily see this in the detail below: the face, especially the central section is too soft.